ENG201 LESSON 19 WRITING ROUTINE, GOOD-NEWS AND GOODWILL MESSAGES
LESSON 19: Writing Routine, Good-News and Goodwill Messages
- What are the three parts of organizing positive messages?
Answer: Clear statement of the main idea, necessary details, and courteous close. - What are the two basic purposes of almost all business communication?
Answer: To convey information and to produce a favorable (or accepting) attitude or response in the audience. - What should the main idea of a positive message be?
Answer: The main idea should be the single most important idea, concisely stated. - What are acknowledgments typically used for?
Answer: Acknowledgments are used for large orders, first orders, and orders that cannot be filled right away. - What are the three main goals when responding to requests that involve a potential sale?
Answer: Respond to the inquiry and answer all questions, encourage the future sale, and leave a good impression of you and your firm. - What are the two essential goals when responding to requests with no potential sale involved?
Answer: Responding to the request and leaving a favorable impression of your company or fostering a good working relationship. - What are favorable responses to routine claims called?
Answer: They are called adjustments. - What are the two types of positive responses to routine credit requests?
Answer: Approving credit and providing credit references. - Why should positive messages begin with a clear statement of the main idea?
Answer: Beginning with the main good news immediately creates a positive tone, rewards the reader for reading, and makes them receptive to the details that follow. - How do necessary details in a positive message “reinforce the positive tone”?
Answer: By providing complete, helpful information that shows thoroughness and genuine interest in being helpful, which strengthens the positive relationship with the reader. - Why is a courteous close important in positive messages?
Answer: A courteous close summarizes the main point, indicates next steps, highlights reader benefits, and leaves the reader with a final positive impression that encourages future interaction. - How can acknowledging orders build customer loyalty?
Answer: Acknowledgments make customers feel valued, provide reassurance that their order was received, set clear expectations, and demonstrate professional follow-through that builds trust. - Why is it important to respond promptly to requests for information and action?
Answer: Prompt responses show respect for the requester’s time, demonstrate organizational efficiency, and create positive impressions that influence the requester’s opinion of your company. - What is the strategic value of building goodwill through routine messages?
Answer: Goodwill creates customer loyalty, strengthens business relationships, generates positive word-of-mouth, and provides a reservoir of goodwill that can help during future problems or disputes. - Why should adjustment letters avoid blaming individuals or departments?
Answer: Blaming creates defensiveness, damages relationships, and focuses on fault rather than solutions. Professional adjustment letters focus on resolving the problem and maintaining customer satisfaction. - How do credit approvals mark the beginning of a business relationship?
Answer: Credit approvals establish the financial terms of the relationship, set expectations for future transactions, and provide an opportunity to build trust and encourage ongoing business. - Why is it important to explain credit arrangements using a positive tone?
Answer: A positive tone makes customers feel trusted and valued, encourages responsible use of credit, and reinforces their decision to establish a financial relationship with your company. - Rewrite this negative statement as a positive one: “We cannot process your application until we receive the complete form.”
Answer: “We will process your application immediately upon receiving the completed form.” - Draft the opening sentence for a good-news message approving a customer’s claim for a refund.
Answer: “We are pleased to approve your request for a full refund of $150 for the damaged merchandise you received.” - Convert this feature-focused statement to a benefit-focused one in a sales response: “Our software has a 30-day trial period.”
Answer: “You can try our software free for 30 days to experience how it will streamline your workflow before making any commitment.” - You are approving a credit application. What resale or promotional information might you include in the closing?
Answer: “As a valued credit customer, you’ll receive exclusive access to our new product launches and special member discounts throughout the year.” - Identify what’s wrong with this good-news opening and rewrite it: “After careful consideration of your request, we have decided to grant you a 10% discount.”
Answer: Problem: sounds grudging and emphasizes the decision process rather than the positive outcome. Rewritten: “We’re happy to offer you a 10% discount on your recent purchase.” - Create a courteous close for a message confirming a workshop registration.
Answer: “We look forward to welcoming you to the ‘Advanced Project Management’ workshop on June 15. Please bring this confirmation letter and a government-issued ID for check-in.” - A customer complains about a delayed shipment. Draft a sentence for your adjustment letter that emphasizes what you will do.
Answer: “We have upgraded your shipping to overnight delivery at no additional cost, and your order will arrive tomorrow by 10:00 AM.” - You are responding to an information request that has no sales potential. How can you still foster goodwill?
Answer: By providing thorough, helpful information with a friendly tone and offering additional assistance if needed, demonstrating that you value the relationship beyond immediate sales potential.